This is What Goodbye Feels Like

So I'm working on a new song, and I thought it might be a good idea to post the lyrics, maybe get some feedback. (Haha nobody reads my blog so it's kind of pointless) But anyways, here's a song I've been working on for about a month. I'm actually kind of proud of myself, but feel free to inform me of any cheesiness/tackiness/suckiness. :) Also, I don't really like the title I chose...Just to be clear, part of this is feelings I've felt, part of it isn't. And no, it's not about anybody/anything in particular.


This is What Goodbye Feels Like

The sun in my face
Pachuca Sunrise in my ear
I can't help but to think of you
But there's snow on the ground
And you've gone away
Honestly, I don't think you even cared at all

Things have changed
You left me to find a new star
But here I stand
Alone and afraid in the dark

So, this is goodbye
I never imagined I could feel like this
There's anger flowing from my lips
With each word I sing
My heart's breaking in two
Your cliched words run through my mind
And bring these cliche tears that I cry

I've said my goodbyes
But I didn't mean them
The unsaid words are screaming in my head
The silence from you
Makes my heart beat heavy
I tell myself I'll be just fine alone

Things have changed
You left me to find a new star
But here I stand
Alone and afraid in the dark

So, this is goodbye
I never imagined I could feel like this
There's anger flowing from my lips
With each word I sing
My heart's breaking in two
Your cliched words run through my mind
And bring these cliche tears that I cry

Will you remember me
Now your life here is through?
Will you look back on old memories
As lovers do?
I'll hold those sweet words you said to me
Deep in my heart
And hope that you will use my songs
To guide you through the dark
We fought and we cried
We tried and we tried
This is all that's left to do
Even though I'm still in love with you

So, this is goodbye
So, this is goodbye
I never imagined I could feel like this
There's anger flowing from my lips
With each word I sing
My heart's breaking in two
Your cliched words run through my mind
And bring these cliche tears that I cry

The sun in my face
Pachuca Sunrise in my ear
I can't help but to think of you

So yep, that's my current project! Let me know what you think! :D