So it's that time again! The time where I post song lyrics and ask you for your opinions. I got the okay from my band manager (Sorine) that they don't suck too badly, so hopefully you will approve. :) I haven't gotten a title yet for this one, so any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Also, in other news, I'll hopefully be working with my friend Braden this week to get some guitar accompaniments started for a lot of the songs I've been working on. I'm aiming to get them all pretty and record them and get a Myspace and such set up for myself sometime in the very near future. Hopefully this will all turn out well.
Untitled
You and me
It was like the sun
Had met the moon
I knew that I
Would fall in love real soon
I just gave you my heart
But you
You never felt that way
But I couldn't tell
Cuz you're a good actor
You played that part so well
You really had me going
Now I just breathe
And try to clear my head
I'm just attempting to forget you
How could you not remember
That day we spent in November
When you held my hand
While we talked in your car
You said I was beautiful
Why would you waste your time, love?
I'm not really that appealing
It doesn't make sense
I'd ask you to explain
But I don't deserve that
Oh baby I
I poured my heart out
I sang you pretty words
I could scream and scream
But I'll never be heard
You made sure of that
Was I crazy
To think you meant
The things you said
I'm sorry that the wasted time's
What you regret
The time you spent with me
Now I just breathe
And try to clear my head
I'm just attempting to forget you
How could you not remember
That day we spent in November
When you held my hand
While we talked in your car
You said I was beautiful
Why would you waste your time, love?
I'm not really that appealing
It doesn't make sense
I'd ask you to explain
But I don't deserve that
Who gave you the right
To take away all of my sad songs
And who gave you the right
To say that we could not be friends
Who gave you the right
To walk away from this clean-handed
And who gave you the right
To dictate how this thing ends?
(repeat)
I guess that's what I get for trusting you
..... and that's the end! Let me know what you think! :D Hopefully I'll actually post another blog about something exciting soon. But my life isn't really the epitome of excitement, so we'll see how that goes. I love you blog readers, have fun! :D
I really like this Alora. Mucho talented. :D
ReplyDeleteI like it a lot, especially the chorus. I personally would have added a few more elaborate words here and there, but overall it is most excellent.
ReplyDeleteAny elaborate word suggestions, Emily? I feel like it's missing somehing too.
ReplyDeletei love this!
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